Very nice story! Dang this is a dark tune...it's enuf to give you the blues! I love it tho...Great job Olivia!

WOW!! Lovely and heartfelt lyric and vocal Olivia!!
I loved this tune before, but now it's even better...excellent work everyone!

LOL, Thanks! Well, the title itself seemed rather dark Greg.
Didn't you want it to be blues about a man pondering his mortality? I tried to incorporate the style & mood you had
listed like sadness, loneliness, heartbreak, death, Dark, & eerie but perhaps I carried it a bit overboard...
This is my first attempt & i know you probably want a male vocalist which is fine with me. I can try rewriting it if you'd like. After I finished it I was thinking...Man, this could possibly go down in history as the most depressing blues song ever! LOL!

Hello Dazzle! Thanks. I think it creeped Greg out though, lol!

To tell the truth it kinda creeped me out some too...
Don't like thinkin' about mortality much, lol!

My wife was about to send me to depression counceling after I cooked this one up...I must be depressed for making a song like this!

LOL! There are many emotions in life,
this one is on the dark side & most people don't
want to be reminded of the mortality-reality but
it exists non the less! I posted this on my reverb site for
feedback...hope I still have some friends left after
they hear it, lol! Actually we could all probably use
some therapy sometimes, lol!