I'm looking for everything in this song, and I'm definitely open to interpretation. My vocals are heavily doctored in this version, and I would truly love for a real singer to do for this song what my limited tone cannot.
Might even need a third verse depending on where it goes, if anyone wants to write one.
All criticisms and suggestions are greatly appreciated and cheerfully welcomed.

I will give it a shot man. Like the tune.

Derek

Glad to have you, bro, I look forward to it!