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Slyder Slyder
Slyder *♪♫♪*
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  Casia-Lyricist   Casia-Lyricist on Wed, Jan 4, 2012 @ 02:24 AM UTC

Great moody piece ... contemplative and haunting.

Maybe something like this. I wrote this last year, it could be modified:

Contradictions
By Casia ©2011

(Intro-chorus1)
Everytime, I
Open up my heart, I
Fall into a world of contradictions

(V1)
You say you want me
Then you say you need me
And soon enough (soon enough)
You're walking past
All the places that
Meant so much
Without a second touch
Without a glance of circumstance

(Chorus2)
Everytime, I
Open up my eyes, I
See into your world of contradictions

(v2)
You're tender touch, is
More than I bargained for, is
The morning sun (the sun, the sun)
That keeps me
Believing we
Are more than
A miracle come true
We are freaks of human nature

(Bridge)
These contradictions
That I dwell upon
Are nothing more
Than empty schemes
My reason for believing
That you and I
Have something real
Something to cry for
Something to die for
Something more than anything in this world

(Outro)
Everytime, I
Open up my heart, I
Fall into a world of contradictions
Everytime, I
Open up my eyes, I
See into your world of contradictions

(Tag)
Why do they hurt so much
Is this better than
If love never came along
     
  Slyder   Slyder on Wed, Jan 4, 2012 @ 05:56 AM UTC

Thank You for posting. Very nice...I like your lyrics, they fit well to the mood setting I was going for.
     
  shov2095   shov2095 on Fri, Jan 6, 2012 @ 06:39 AM UTC

can i contribute bass here? if so, then can you write the basic chords used here? :D thanks.
     
  Slyder   Slyder on Fri, Jan 6, 2012 @ 07:04 AM UTC

Hey shovon, would love to have some bass. I would also like to post the chords used. But when it comes to chords and such...everything I do is played by feel or ear. Sorry :(
     

 

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