V1
We played together in the park
Kites soaring to the sky
We were so young, so strong, and carefree
We used to climb that old oak tree
(pre-chorus)
Where did it go, do you know?
Where did it go?
(Chorus)
Come what may,
It doesn't have to be this way.
V2
Tomorrow is another day
You and I will walk away
But for now just let it be
Ride the waves, swim the sea
Come what may, it’ll have to be.
Come what may, let us see.
(Chorus)
Come what may,
It doesn't have to be this way.
(Repeat)
DarleneP on
Tue, Feb 21, 2012 @
12:54 AM UTC
Dan you did a bang up job!! Both with lyrics and vocals!! Let's see what Wayne thinks about this direction. Great job!!
shamika on
Fri, Feb 24, 2012 @
11:07 AM UTC
Very enjoyable, good harmonies - vocals respect the music
DantheMan2 on
Fri, Feb 24, 2012 @
11:44 AM UTC
Weird, shamika no longer exists...but thanks.
Wayne likes the idea enough he would like me to try again. He would like more words and this demo is rough and pitchy in places. So I am going to retry. I will try to use Raul's track too as this might change things.
If someone else would like to use my idea (or even their own) and knock it out of the park so to speak, please send me a PM that you are working on a vocal. I am also doing a harmony here in this track. Maybe someone else should do the harmony?