Incorporated some perch and silent sections. Be honest! I don't want to over-cheese it.

I like it - I agree with the earlier comments about adding a more percussion and having a quiter section. I was hoping you'd get another contribution to go over my rambling guitar part from approx 00:32 to 00:47. I was just noodling to fill space there.

Ah. I don't know if you noticed, but I cut your spy guitar into pieces and placed them at strategic bars. It took away any rambling (which I didn't hear as rambling) and put them in a more robotic rhythm. However, the variances in your guitar gives it an authentic "real music" effect and reduces the programmed sound of the song.

Sounds good!