Hey Vinay and Brooke I got this far (playoff basketball is on - sry :)
Not sure I like my chorus can't seem to find a "tough" melody for it

An idea for the Day Trader Lyrics...
Crash

As he flops behind the wheel of his new black Lexus he blandly thinks to himself what a great day, a great day
He scalped his way to a few cool million playing the market doing his thing, his day trades, his day trades
His world is spinning he had such a celebration
Buying drinks for ladies began his inebriation
He dropped a few thousand being obnoxious and loud
Throwing round money trying to impress his crowd

By day he trades, by night he plays
on a collision course, in so many ways
He's picking up speed
He wont slow down
He flies through life
Barely touching the ground

Janitor Lyrics here?

Bridge for Day Trader:
He enters Broadway at the Great White Way
A drunk rich white guy with enough money to pay
Faster and faster he drives as his world blurs by
The 3AM traffic was light and was letting him fly
Into the Canyon of Heroes how fitting he thinks
His triumph in sales worth every one of his drinks
Approaching Liberty Ave why slow down now
Too drunk to think too drunk to know how

Hey Cool start - I just added a track as well - going to build it up over the next week. I was thinking our voices might work well in a Waters/Gilmour way - you have that Waters sound and I'm more Gilmour - I think its really going to sound great -with the different voices playing the different characters.

Waters and Gilmore - I would love to hear what you have in mind B! BTW I haven't heard anyone produce vocals better than you on here. Your work always has character and style. If Vinay is okay with it are you game to take my dry vocal seps and apply your creativity and your production toys?

Hey guys. I really like what I am hearing. Go ahead and keep experimenting with this in any way you want.

A couple of comments...

I hear melodic similarities between Brooke's original verse idea and Chuck's verse on After Dark. What about melding the two?

What could really be cool in the last chorus is to have both of you singing two separate melodic parts simultaneously. Call and answer or interweaving. I don't know...just an idea.

Rock On!

Yeah, I like the idea of "off kilter" melody - its different, but done right could be very cool.