Rough mix with all in to date. Testing out some ideas at the end.

Good starting point! I like the choppy idea near the end :-)
The intro comes in a bit strong, but I really like the guitar work. What if the lead started it by itself, (or w/ drums) and the rest came in @0:10? or built up to the 10 sec mark?

Sounding cool! We need to figure out something to ease the song in at the start. If you can try Matts ideas.

I like what you did with the end. I think we need some Craig on this tune.

We might be better served having two measure before the lead, don't you think? I can try both and then we can pick.

re: end - yeah, well, the solo's not that exciting, lol, so I thought something to change the pace under it would be good since the whole tune is kinda "chugchugchugchugchuggachugchug".

perhaps feature as the drumless is based on this, etc....

the added guitar works on this really take it to another level. The end.. I love that too. This mix sounds great.. craig likes yeh?

Bill we need the SEPS!

Ah. Yeah - I see why I didn't put them up - I dumped mp3 by accident and never went back and redid them.

Stay tuned.

I have to say I really like how this has evolved - Luke's vocals have transformed it completely. It would be good to get a drumless version of this version , so I can track some drums this weekend / early next week?

I'll do that this weekend. I'm away right now.