not finished but you get the idea.

I really like your idea Anton!
It's exactly what i didn't expected and i really like it. It's very funky.

Maybe i would play the verse (0.41) a octave down and the chorus (1.23) with the same line but would try to play it more "atmosperic"..

Again, i appreciate a lot your job and i think i will try to play it in a funkier way.

glad you like it. I went for a funky feel without slapping/plucking.(the last 5 projects on kompoz i've been slapping).
can't go down one octave ..I play 4 string bass... and I need something under the lowest note for a ghost note, so even dropping to low D won't do....maybe transpose the song??...(just kidding)

You like the switch between the 16th verse and the melodic chorus? It's hard to tell without any vocal or melody.

when you say "play it in a funkier way" you mean the keyboard part?(cause then I'd better wait for that)

Yep i mean the keyboard, and maybe i will try something else with the guitar stuff. But only for the verses. And i will wait the bass line to be finished. :)
Thank again for your work on this track!