John, just a quick idea for percs along the lines I was talking about. Probably doesn't even need this IMHO.

This is brill Peter. There are some very subtle percussion things happening. Probably need to tinker with the EQ on guitar to give it a clearer presence without volume. (I appreciate that our systems might be giving us slightly different "ears"). A drop in or out might also compliment and colour the overall piece. I would be most pleased to receive your responses and seps .

The graphing failed each time when my tracks were uploaded and I am pleased yours was OK:)

yeah......... I've been having some peculiar problems today with uploading/downloading, things not going as planned, still, all seem OK now.

I have a lot of leway on tweeking if you think it has legs? I've also been playing with some synth fxs but held back to see if we were on the same sheet first.

I can upload seps so far, if you like, first thing tomorrow.

oh...i was so totally getting into this...and it cut off...
you will have more coming, I'm sure :)
This tune combined with your percussion and all that is going on here is a good mix and took me on a little journey...wish it would have gone to a smooth ending here on this track:)

Hi Peter and thank you. I am about to put up SEPs for the acoustic and electric tracks. I have altered the EQ a bit on these and you may wish to compare with your percussion. When I was writing I imagined that the G to A section (0.50 -1.05 and 2.45 - 3.05) would build a little. I like the feel under the piano last section:)

@Carol - Thank you for encouraging us - more to come:)