I uploaded some lyrics in "Talk About It" for a Vox idea I had. Had friend Marc record it yesterday. Some words don't work with meter e.g. eyelids and bedroom. However that's the idea. Comments?

This is a great beginning. A chorus perhaps. Marcs voice is so smooth.
When the guitar quiets down, the lyric should then begin to tell a story about why someone would be tied up and twisted.

I have a an idea I'll post in the "talk about it".

It sounds like a love song...
reminescent of the Cult.
Strong beat...strength in rythm
Hot tune.
If ya want, or if this can be of any help....
try this for lyrics...


(somewhere around 0:00:58.095)
"Her memmory calls me
our life was so perfect
we tried.
The western sands heat
was so hot on her cheeks
as I tried...
the nites that we tangled
the mornings resolved it
I cried.(stop)
(somewhere around 0:01:30.018)
Our love it grew strong
and in time came along
sweet sublime.
(somewhere around 0:01:03:765)

(somewhere around 0:01:30.096)
I breathed my loves last breathe
the needle was still hot
...she died.

(where ever)
No mans an island
I lived for her loving
I cried."

hope this helps.

Falcon