Not the entire track but could be an intro or a bridge into club-type track

I kinda like it but it needs to be insync more
and a slight echo.
The key is off.
But I really do appreciate the intro idea.
You could try to up it to a mid C.
And maybe that would work!
Something like Steve Jay's but with less echo.

It seems very cool arrangements and sounds... my style (I'm obliged to listen to it discretly at work). The vocal is too loud with the mix. Don't give up this project...

That's right Pascal...just trying out stuff. Not close to a mix yet on this. I am trying to keep my contribution minimal so others can take a stab at it.