Raven

Yet another idea - this one is fairly up tempo and has the Eurodance sawtooth sound! Just playing with your vocal at the moment so I didn't use all your lyrics. And I need to work a bit more on the middle section of this.

Had a lot of fun with it. Hope you like it.

Rob

More soft than what made Steven. Maybe the vocal is too loud with the rest of the mix. No?

I noticed that too. The vocal might be mixed a touch high but the whole mix seems a lot softer than what others post. Not sure why - I use hard limiting in Audition and everything is just below 0 db. I might overload everything next time and see what it sounds like after uploading.

Slam dunk..great effort.

This beat is better than Steve's.
But the vocal isn't insync.
That's all.
It should blend with the music a little.
True.
But you guys know, I'm the one who has to like the song!
And win over a fan!

Nice! The chorus shows impeccible pop sensibility.

The vocal isn't in sync because of the method used to create the track. The original didn't have any BPM indicated (Raven, you might think about doing that as it would help contributors - do you sing to a metronome?), so I tried to match it with a tempo. Whole phrases have been chopped up and re-ordered to fit the song structure.

This method only works for presenting ideas. For the final result to sound natural the singer (that's you Raven!) needs to do a new vocal from beginning to end over an instrumental version of the mix. Then the mixer can drop the vocal sep back into the track and we should have a song that gels together!

Let's just let McBlaze do something to this.
I wouldn't give up on this track yet.
Steve did wonderous to his B/C his was insync.
Play around with it though and have fun! :)
I want the talk to come to the end.
And it layed out like Steve's.
And beat fast-paced.
And grande piano layered after the beginning and during middle.

Someday when I get my synth hooked up.
Maybe that could give some of the idea out clearer.
I have weird tastes, I guess!