I just joined about 6 hours ago so I'm not sure what I'm doing.. I put some lyrics and vocs on your song just as an idea.. see what you think.. in the meanwhile I will try to learn the right way to do things.

cause love is a beautiful thing

Adam in the bush and a serpent’s lie
Eve she look’n good with an apple pie
Now where my clothes baby
You made me so old lady

Walk into the sunrise
tell your life it’s been nice
cause love is a beautiful thing

David looked upon her from the roof on high
Basheba make a man tell a deadly lie
Her bodys soul baby
But she make you so old davy

Walk into the sunrise
tell your life it’s been nice
cause love is a beautiful thing

I gotcha now at least I thought
You got me now and your pouring my heart
out in the cold
You make me so old lady

Walk into the sunrise
tell your life it’s been nice
cause love is a beautiful thing

Lucky 13 it’s the devils dice
Climbing gravity she got the system all tied
inside my soul
you make me so old lady

Walk into the sunrise
tell your life it’s been nice
cause love is a beautiful thing

Oh... and also.. I didn't really work out the rap.. I thought if you liked it there would be someone much better than me to do it.

I like the way your voice sounds on this tune man...It gives the song somewhat of a sultry feel...thanks alot dude..I appreciate that.

thanks.. I'll clean it up when i get some free time and upload in a format that will work with what you have

I can't wait to hear it Ezra my man...thanks again...I really like where it's heading.