i had to slice this a bit, thinki i got off meter.. but I can fix that see what yall think.. this is a awesome song you've done.
and i'll be beside
you in every stride
though we're beaten down
on the poor side of town
you can know it's true
that i'm never through
till my breath is thin
and the story ends
our fire will be warm
though our cup is dry
safe from the storm
and peace at night
we may win even if loose this fight
though i'm sad at times
feel the awful weight
of my dreams for you
and my children's fate
i wont tary long
for tomorrows song
is a verse today
and a chorus away
our heart will be full
under candle light
children will love
what we know is right
and though we're r wrong doesn't mean thier right
and i'll be beside
you in every stride
though we're beaten down
on the poor side of town
you can know it's true
that i'm never through
till my breath is thin
and the story ends
markmiller on
Fri, Dec 25, 2009 @
12:41 PM UTC
Interesting take on this Ezra. I had never thought of this piece with lyrics....I like the prose and the quality of your voice...nice work!
kingez on
Fri, Dec 25, 2009 @
08:19 PM UTC
thanks.. it's a little sloppy hope to mess with it a bit more tomorrow
Lee88 on
Sun, Dec 27, 2009 @
02:05 PM UTC
I like what you're doing ezra. Have to say I'm committed to publishing the last track that marty mixed as a "completed kompoz project". But, would consider gearing up a different project to build these nice vocals ideas into - maybe name it Every Stride? Anybody else have thoughts on that?
kingez on
Sun, Dec 27, 2009 @
02:12 PM UTC
Ya I thought that too. It's not really built Taylor made for vocals but I heard the melody in my head and had to try it. I was actually suprised it worked .. It's a killer instrumental too.