Sounds much better. Maybe guitar and violin sound a bit... "separated"? I think it could be a reverb/ambient thing, something to take care of when the mix progresses with other instruments too.

Thanks Enrico. I agree we should let it alone and re-consider as parts may be added.
Jason and I have sweated blood recently with acoustic guitars!

I'm sorry I didn't get this done sooner. I have been working on an album with BurntWill and it took up a lot of time. But I have time now, and here is my lyric idea. The verses follow the violin music exactly. The chorus is a little more free-style. Let me know what you think. If you want it for the project I can post a pdf file.

Veronique

Please sit with me
here near the fire.
I get so lost in your
innocent desire.
Please show me how
I can reach you.
The reasons are many,
the moments are too few.

Chorus:
Veronique, don?t cry
when we say good-bye.
Our time together
always ends too soon.
And if you miss me,
my smile?s in the moon.

On a stray path
everything?s new.
Teach me about myself
through my love for you.
Laughter has touched
all that we say.
Whisper a promise while
showing me the way.

Chorus

Optional Ending:
Please sit with me
here near the fire
while I get lost in your
innocent desire.

This is great SueBee, thank you - please upload a pdf