so...a first draft, but it feels right?
cheers (Sela can improvise it)
scotty
PLUS
Wally099 commented 4mo+17dy ago
Oh ya! Well done Sir! It flows really nice
Scottyv commented 4mo+17dy ago
Thanks Pat!
your music lead me there...let's see what
Sela tinks!
selaperforms commented 4mo+17dy ago
Very fitting I can't wait to load the trax and give it a sing thru.
Scotty Thanks
Wally beautiful tune.. so fitting to an adventuous mood.
Scottyv commented 4mo+17dy ago
:o) :o) :o)
Scottyv commented 4mo+16dy ago
might consider changing the word "improve" to something
else? Maybe " improvise on your life" adds a rhyme within
the line...which is always a plus! Just a thought
cheers