Started by KingJadean, © All Rights Reserved 2020
Following on from your comments regarding the need to establish the lead character as a hero prior to using my original lyric.
This would require the addition of an additional verse at the beginning. I'm not sure whether you want to change the strong structurally but here's the lyric with the additional opening lyric.
Use it or discard it the choice is yours.
If you want me to submit a vocal with a melody to fit your original upload to demonstrate my interpretation then please let me know.