I just listened. I like it mostly - it will depend on the bass, though, whether or not it's going to work. I do think a straighter, more pop oriented beat would work better, since this is clearly a pop song. But unless you want to try something different, can you please post the seps? Thanks! :) P.S.: No hurry, as I probably won't have time for it tonight, and there is always enough in the pipeline to work on. :)
But yea, I treated it more as a rock ballad.... I can try something else but won?t get to it until tomorrow. :)
Whenever you find the time and motivation. We are in no hurry!