Mario - two minds with but a single thought. Spooky, ain't it?
v4a just uploaded; I did it about 7 hours ago and was going to suggest it to you about now. I left the final "approach" high, for a bit of drama. And I also nudged your final note into a more "suspenseful" position - what do you think?
If I read your suggestion correctly, it's up to you if you want to re-record, or just send me a passage to drop in, or let the software take the strain.
Let me know,