mix is good, the lead vocal is a bit piercing in the upper mid 3kish maybe, not sure if I'm digging the delays, but its a taste thing. The last verse of course was a different take, so matching is an issue. The last battle cry I liked the blending with the guitar harmonies. it made an ultra crescendo. Putting it after kills the emotional intensity IMHO
If so, maybe I could blend that in in spots....