In The Middle (working title) Pop/Rock

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[Chorus] Hold up a second where did we go wrong Since I was a kid, I learned I had to run From love, cause girls like you only leave me dry H-hold up a second, keep the fantasy If this is a dream, don't die out on me Caught in the middle, I'll climb up to breathe Caught in the middle I'll climb up to breathe Caught in the middle, caught in the middle (x2) [Chorus Variation] Hold up a second where did we go wrong Since I was a kid, I learned I had to run From love, cause girls like you only leave me sad H-hold up a second, keep the fantasy [Refrain] It started out great, we were more than friends I thought it was fate, until it was pretend We argue more and more We argue more and more When will you hit the door? Why are you leaving for? (x2) [Chorus] Hold up a second where did we go wrong Since I was a kid, I learned I had to run From love, cause girls like you only leave me dry H-hold up a second, keep the fantasy If this is a dream, don't die out on me Caught in the middle, I'll climb up to breathe Caught in the middle I'll climb up to breathe Caught in the middle, caught in the middle [Refrain] It started out great, we were more than friends I thought it was fate, until it was pretend We argue more and more We argue more and more When will you hit the door? Why are you leaving for? (x2) [Instrumental Break] [Chorus] Hold up a second where did we go wrong Since I was a kid, I learned I had to run From love, cause girls like you only leave me dry H-hold up a second, keep the fantasy If this is a dream, don't die out on me Caught in the middle, I'll climb up to breathe Caught in the middle, I'll climb up to breathe Caught in the middle, caught in the middle(x2)


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stoman   commented 3yr+7mo ago


Hi, Tracy! Nice to "meet" you! :) Thank you for your interest in this song, and for your lyric suggestion. Like I said to Mohammed, who uploaded a lyric suggestion too, I will usually leave lyrics unaccepted until a singer volunteers to sing them. If there are multiple lyrics, and different singers (or even the same singer) want to take a stab at some or all of them, I'll create spin-offs for those versions, so no efforts are wasted. I noticed that you posted a demo vocal too. That's good, as it gives the singer an idea of the phrasing! I don't know if you meant the melody to be used as is. If you did, I would say it is too simple and too repetitive, but I can definitely see it as a starting point. Thanks again! :)