No More Charades Alternative Folk

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Creative Brief

Hi,

I'm not looking to overwhelm this song with too much, just light tastes to make it more appealing. Listen to the instruments outside of the guitar and vocals here to see what I'm talking about by light tastes: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pv-ql1sYa5E

As for specifics:

Drums/percussion: I'd particularly think this song could work well with percussion around the consistent beat. I am well aware that it isn't played completely in time... however, I feel this is a fairly good take because (despite the fact that the time isn't perfect)... it's not mechanical.

Guitar: I'm not sold that an additional guitar is necessary. However, if a pattern of some sort was added, it could work. Maybe highlighting the existing riff.

Bass: I do think a good bass could help this song. I'm not sure if an acoustic sound or electric sound would be best fit. 

Keys: Keys could work here too. I'm not sure what would sound best. 

Female Background vocal: I think the last couple chorus need an additional voice or two. My voice cracks towards the end, so it would be good to fill that with someone else's.

 

Here are the lyrics:

In your eyes, she sees disapproval. And in your mind, she cannot find... removal.

When will it be... good enough?

When will you see... the good in us?

When will it be... good enough?

When will you see... the good in us?

No more charades.

When she apologizes, it doesn't dent the past.

And when she awakes to your eyes, she dreams her crimes... recast.

When will it be... good enough?

When will we see... the good in us?

When will it be.... good enough?

When will we see... the good in us?

No more charades.

When will it be... good enough?

When will we see... the good in us?

When will it be... good enough...

No more charades.

Additional Information

Genre Alternative Folk Key A flat major acoustic emotional folk got ideas? great song help needed radio song singer-songwriter

Collaboration started September 2, 2015 by 13inlet
Last upload 4yr+12mo ago


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Collaborators
13inlet Pat S
Paoli PA USA
Creator
SeeBread Seb Read
Birmingham United Kingdom
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AndrewB Andrew Boucher
Oil City PA USA