Super rough but gives the general idea :)
Lindsay I've been waiting for a long time now for you to really sing with some confidence and passion when your recording your vocals. Someday you're going to have to get out of your comfort zone of singing in a little room by yourself where no one can hear you where you are comfortable with everything being a totally controlled situation for you. I'm not trying to be mean when I say these things to you either, what I'm doing is trying to bring the best out of you production wise and until you can just let yourself go and not care what anyone else thinks about your vocals you're going to continue to struggle with your vocal ability which is far beyond anything that you have given to me yet at this point when it comes to anything that we've worked on so far together. :)
Though this was just a rough upload to get a feel for the timing/melody of the lyrics I wrote, i get what you're saying. I've never been trained how to use my voice and also am a rather confidence lacking individual. I really wouldn't mind others with better control and confidence singing lyrics I write, I just put rough drafts up so the idea of them can be understood ...especially since I haven't been able to upload vox of the quality needed for any song to sound as it should! :)