Started by stoman, © All Rights Reserved 2016
Like this perhaps?
I agree, losing the fourth chirp is better! I also like what you put in place of the fourth chirp, but I wonder if you need it to happen the second time at the end of choruses 1 and 2 as we're coming out of those choruses. Just a thought.
We'll only know if we try it. :)
And perhaps the current sound is a little too sweet ... ?
Wait - are you saying it should NOT be repeated at the end of the choruses (because currently it is repeated)?
Correct! Don't repeat a second time in the first two choruses is what I'm proposing as an idea.
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