Creative Brief
This concept is highly undeveloped so I invite lots of ideas. It grew out of a philosophical concept that I was playing with, and went from there...I imagine it in a Pink Floyd style to deliver the intent of the lyrics. I've included two interpretations of the vocal melody and the lyrics...
Here's the original lyrics, which are subject to change...
DO YOU SEE IT? (The verses represent approaching (1 and 2), and stepping back from (3) an illusion. The center section represents being inside of the illusion.)
VERSE 1:
At last do you see it?
Appearing in the haze…
So many days we’ve watched for it.
So many times I’ve seen
Clear blue sky.
But I’ve stumbled…
Wondered why I ever try.
VERSE 2:
At last do you see me…
Emerging from the maze?
Triumphant
Over frays I’ve known
At long, long last..
All we do is laugh
For the foe is finally gone.
See, the storm is finally passed.
<< This center part is intentionally designed as a contrast to the verses. I probably need to come up with a more traditional chorus structure, but I'm trying to symbolically describe a constructed reality, where once inside, we think we have absolute clarity, but we've lost ourselves...>>
But it fades away…
How it fades away…
Just before I reach the sun
My vision fails
Our plan undone
Away…
But in that glimpse
That fleeting drop
I have control
I make time stop
Now I see it!
The glory of the maze!
Behold, the beauty of the walls!
At last you see
What I can be
What a poor mistaken world
That gave up, on me…
But it fades, away…
<< The bubble bursts and the individual realizes that construction is/was all an illusion. This center section is where I need the most help with your creativity. >>
Verse 3:
Oh don’t you see it?
Step in and be amazed!
I built this all for you!
And when it comes down
Stop and look around.
You’ll have finally found
The key
This will fade away.
It will all fade away.
It will fade away.
Additional Information
Genre Alternative BPM 116.0
Collaboration started May 11, 2017 by
irish
Last upload 3yr+9mo ago
Initial Copyright Statement:
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irish, All Rights Reserved.
Effective on May 11, 2017
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bagpipe Derek Barlas
Kanata Ontario Canada
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Airone Erwan Grandais
Saint malo BZH France
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PilotProject Michel Pilotte
Montreal Quebec Canada
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GoYeah Luc Goyer
Montreal Quebec Canada
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irish Ryan Christman
Ann Arbor Michigan USA
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Buttercup Christine Linge
Dubai United Arab Emirates
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Captainzero Peter Guyenette
Singleton Heights NSW Australia
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