Summer In Love Alternative

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EricW   commented 2yr+7mo ago


Their parts of this lyric that I would like to change if that's okay. I'm not really sure about the parts that you added from the original lyrics sheet you had but I'd like some time to play around with it and maybe change the wording and maybe some of the phrasing just so it fits better and how I think of the song if you're cool with that

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EricW   commented 2yr+7mo ago


Also what are you referencing when you say my hands around Leo's neck just like that 2004 movie

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EricW   commented 2yr+7mo ago


I've always had this dream That you'd be in love with me We'd swim and lay around With the warm sun watching us My hands trace your back Then you'll pull me into you I want to know what it is to live as lovers do Summer in love Summer in love I don't want to be alone During summer but the truth is I'm on my own, It's been this way for far too long losing all hope I can't stop crying These Tears Exposing myself along with all of my fears This season will pass me by I know that I'll never have a Summer in love Summer in love I don't want to be alone During summer Summer in love Summer in love I don't want to be alone During summer

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EricW   commented 2yr+7mo ago


Forget everything I wrote. I will try and sing the song as you wrote it, some minor tweaks to will happen to allow the lyrics to fit the song. But for the most part I'm going to try and record this song as is. I was talking to someone about this song collaboration and they said that just because I don't understand certain phrasing and the lyric or line doesn't mean much to me, it means a lot to you. You spent along time pouring your feelings into your lyrics and it would be selfish and rude of me to swoop in and change them. Hope to hear from you soon to discuss this song further