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pmrwords commented 3yr+5mo ago
Hi Mr. Hargreaves Fantastic music See what you think to the lyrics ??? Kind Regards Patricia
TimHargreaves commented 3yr+5mo ago
Oh, I love them! Should have mentioned that I didn't care what the title was, I'd just put something up at random but actually really glad you did use them because you've really pulled together a nice theme. I've got a few tweaks in my head to make the syllable count fit the rhythm the melody needs to be and I've actually got an idea for the ending but in essence these lyrics are perfect. Thanks for contributing! I'll get started on a melody / gospel backing vocals as is the style
pmrwords commented 3yr+5mo ago
Thankyou very much that means a lot. I'm going to upload a very rough guide of how I heard the words go to the music Again thankyou for accepting
TimHargreaves commented 3yr+5mo ago
I've uploaded a score for what I think would be a good melody. The whole thing is essentially your lyrics and melody guide but just with a few tweaks that I think make it fit with the piano and make a bit more sense. Open to feedback if you think anything I added/changed was better being left as was.
pmrwords commented 3yr+5mo ago
It's ok the changes , go with how you feel works best for the song. So you need to put yourself also on the lyric credits !
CrimsonSaxPH commented 3yr+5mo ago
nice lyrics!
pmrwords commented 3yr+5mo ago
Hi and Welcome to Kompoz. Thankyou for your nice comments :)