Cold Water Man Indie Rock

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[00:48 to 01:04] the feeling has always been wrong then why is this sudden rushed feeling of guilt? we still are an incomplete song then why leave the castle that you and me built? [01:05 to 01:26 (chorus)] this busy noisy highway in what you hear and i say i wanna run towards you cause we should talk some more maybe we should walk some more baby i can't be going back it's a tendency i lack i wanna run towards you cause we should talk some more maybe we should walk some more baby [01:27 to 01:43] you know that it wasn't a lie when we took my dirt bike and went to the moon you loved the look of the grey sky when we unlocked and held hands through the monsoon [01:44 to 02:05 (chorus)] the things you left unsaid are the things i might have read i wanna run towards you cause we should talk some more maybe we should walk some more baby my heart can't be consoled neither can it be controlled i wanna run towards you cause we should talk some more maybe we should walk some more baby [02:16 to 02:33] the songs we didn't sing remind me of you the phones that didn't ring remind me of you the pictures i deleted remind me of you the people i cheated remind me of you [after 02:33 (if a chorus section can be added)] it's like a thousand knives when we go back to our lives still i run towards you cause we should talk some more maybe we should walk some more baby you step into your car and drive off to somewhere far still i run towards you cause we should talk some more maybe we should walk some more baby


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JayeshRaikar   commented 10mo+23dy ago


hi, the lyrics are about a couple ending their relationship (due to whatever reasons) although they are still very much in love let me know if it works for you or need any changes. any feedback is appreciated also, can a chorus be added after 02:33? if yeah, I have posted the third chorus in the lyrics thanks jayesh

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JayeshRaikar   commented 5 days ago


Hey Jeff, It's been 10 months and we haven't found a vocalist. The music here is beautiful and I believe it's the lyrics that are stopping vocalists from attempting it (a lotta vocalists prefer singing their own lyrics) Maybe it would be a better idea if I remove my lyrics and then this song might take a step forward. Let me know what you prefer I'll wait for two weeks. If we don't find a vocalist, ill remove it Thanks Jayesh