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No claim mark deckard vox lyrics Uploaded 2yr+7mo ago by markdeckard



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markdeckard   commented 2yr+7mo ago


If this is of any interest to you it might require a spinoff because I just couldnt hash out a third verse and prechorus so i repeated the second chorus and well youll see. Heres the words Someones coming but i cant make the face out just a spirit haunting drug down in my heart i wanna crawl but this dream is in control of me if its the devil say I gave at the office if he pushes say I know a good prophet Im not for sale but theres plenty more where I come from chorus You think you know who I am you think im part of your plan you got no claim to my soul my debt was paid long ago I traded all my tracks for some nail scars the kick is easy when it finds all the right parts The taste is gone and Im much stronger than I was before your not as tall as i remember you at one time and all your whispers are just noise way back in my mind Hows it feel to lose another customer to love

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BennySawdust   commented 2yr+7mo ago


Nice vocal performance! But may I ask why you didn't use the lyrics I already wrote for the song?

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markdeckard   commented 2yr+7mo ago


Your lyrics were interesting, i just felt something different in the way words would fall into the rythym so I went with my own exploration. If the idea doesnt make the cut I still had fun and it was a stimulaing songwriting excercise for me anyway. Thanks for the feedback.

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BennySawdust   commented 2yr+7mo ago


I am not sure I really understand your motivation here. Anyway, if you are interested in giving my lyrics a try, I am happy to give you any assistance you need. I made sure the number of syllables fits the song etc. So I can give you hints where the words fit into the rhythm. I can make a rough melody as sheet music or guitar track or even sing it. Then you can explore from there.

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BennySawdust   commented 2yr+7mo ago


I rechecked the lyrics and I think you are right, some parts are hard to place. I am going to revise that and upload a rough melody sketch as well.

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BennySawdust   commented 2yr+7mo ago


Please check out this file: https://www.kompoz.com/music/collaboration/838050/file/853597 and version 3 of the lyrics: https://www.kompoz.com/music/collaboration/838050/file/845238

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markdeckard   commented 2yr+7mo ago


Oh and great track!

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Rowin   commented 2yr+7mo ago


Hi Mark! Thanks for your upload, I do like it very much! Great lyrics as well. I think this would be nice to work on with you. However it is sometimes a bit out of key, you do have a great sounding voice. Melodically I do like the verses a bit more than the choruses, but it is definitely useful! Thanks man, I will take some time to dive into and get back to you ASAP!

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Rowin   commented 2yr+6mo ago


Hi Mark, Sorry for my late reply. But can you please upload the seperate vocal line? I would like to give it a try to mix it in. Thx!

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markdeckard   commented 2yr+6mo ago


So sorry for my delay. track is up soon

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bcstudios   commented 2yr+7mo ago


could you put up a time stamp map for the lyrics please? great sounding tune!!

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bcstudios   commented 2yr+7mo ago


never mind..found it..my bad

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bcstudios   commented 2yr+6mo ago


Deep lyrics..Nice..