Started by Rowin, © All Rights Reserved 2018
If this is of any interest to you it might require a spinoff because I just couldnt hash out a third verse and prechorus so i repeated the second chorus and well youll see.
Heres the words
but i cant make the face out
just a spirit haunting
drug down in my heart
i wanna crawl but this dream
is in control of me
if its the devil
say I gave at the office
if he pushes say
I know a good prophet
Im not for sale
but theres plenty more
where I come from
You think you know who I am
you think im part of your plan
you got no claim to my soul
my debt was paid long ago
I traded all my tracks
for some nail scars
the kick is easy when
it finds all the right parts
The taste is gone and
Im much stronger than I was before
your not as tall
as i remember you at one time
and all your whispers
are just noise way back in my mind
Hows it feel to lose
another customer to love
Nice vocal performance!
But may I ask why you didn't use the lyrics I already wrote for the song?
Your lyrics were interesting, i just felt something different in the way words would fall into the rythym so I went with my own exploration. If the idea doesnt make the cut I still had fun and it was a stimulaing songwriting excercise for me anyway. Thanks for the feedback.
I am not sure I really understand your motivation here.
Anyway, if you are interested in giving my lyrics a try, I am happy to give you any assistance you need. I made sure the number of syllables fits the song etc. So I can give you hints where the words fit into the rhythm. I can make a rough melody as sheet music or guitar track or even sing it. Then you can explore from there.
I rechecked the lyrics and I think you are right, some parts are hard to place. I am going to revise that and upload a rough melody sketch as well.
Please check out this file:
and version 3 of the lyrics:
Oh and great track!
Hi Mark! Thanks for your upload, I do like it very much! Great lyrics as well. I think this would be nice to work on with you. However it is sometimes a bit out of key, you do have a great sounding voice. Melodically I do like the verses a bit more than the choruses, but it is definitely useful!
Thanks man, I will take some time to dive into and get back to you ASAP!
Sorry for my late reply. But can you please upload the seperate vocal line? I would like to give it a try to mix it in.
So sorry for my delay. track is up soon
could you put up a time stamp map for the lyrics please? great sounding tune!!
never mind..found it..my bad
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