Time Changes (working title) - with lyric suggestion by Jodeen Clantz Pop

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Time Changes - 2018-07-01 - Demo/Bedtrack Uploaded 1yr+9mo ago by stoman



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Jodeenshead   commented 1yr+8mo ago


Oh, I really like this one....Wish I had time to develop some words for it...Well just a few jotted down real quick. Not so great I know, but a direction...Let me know if this is a workable direction or scrap it...No offense will be taken...Regards, Jodeen Who you lookin at With stars in your eyes You should be knowin I not havin any of that No more games I don't want to play Ring around the Rosie Ashes to ashes And all that crap This London bridge Fell down flat Infantile minds Ain't my kind Competing with Life size Tonka toys And Monster trucks What a waste Of my time Time changes everything Hard truths and realities No long drawn out goodbyes Cause, I can be Who I want to be Times changes Everything And so have we

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stoman   commented 1yr+8mo ago


Thanks, Jodeen! Of course, please do continue with it. As you may know I have a habit of only accepting lyrics once a singer comes along and wants to sing them. It's the singers who must feel comfortable with a lyric, not me. :) Even though I feel tempted to compose some vocal melodies again, like I used to do many years ago. Here at Kompoz it seems that the majority of singers prefer to create their own melodies.

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Jodeenshead   commented 1yr+8mo ago


Added a real quick verse to the above, trying to flesh it out more. I know that my words are subject to be trashed, but I still have fun writing anyway.

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Jodeenshead   commented 1yr+8mo ago


Slightly different with a little detour. Use or don't use it's all good. I enjoy writing to your collaborations. I have a few in my hopper that have never seen the light of day...Regards, Jodeen Time Changes Who you lookin at Those stars in your eyes You should be knowin I ain't havin any of that No more games I don't wanna play Ring around the Rosie Ashes to ashes And all that crap Infantile minds Ain't my kind Playing with Tonka toys And Monster trucks What a waste Of my life Time changes everything Hard truths Bitter realities Pleasseeeee No long drawn out goodbyes Cause, I can be Who I want to be Times changes Everything And so have we Shamefully shady Dumbass, caught in the act Shackled and cuffed You cry foul, sack up You put yourself there And, I don't really care Sooooo Suck it up Cause no way in hell Will I ever bail you out So go on and enjoy that Room Without a view Because you deserved it More than just a time or two

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stoman   commented 1yr+8mo ago


Looks pretty good to me! :)

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stoman   commented 1yr+8mo ago


Better post it as a PDF, so everybody can find it easily!

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Jodeenshead   commented 1yr+8mo ago


Thanks Steffen! Will do, later this evening when I get back in my office.