(She only hugged him when he was) ILL Breakbeat

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A little pop song that sounds sort of strange to my ear, I hope someone will find a way to make it better and fix my English mistakes.

A little boy is home alone;
His mother has an important job.
Music plays and TV's on
He opens windows to catch a cold.

Mother, tell me where have you been
I want you to come in
Save me – I'm so ill!

She only hugged him when he was ill.

He lost his papers on a plane
That's what they wrote in the police report
Couldn't tell them what's his name
So he's enclosed at the airport.

Holland – yes, he was on a pill
That's how he likes to feel
Far from uncanny real

She only hugged him when he was ill.

Ten more years and she is gone
So he moved back to the mother's flat.
By the window all alone
Cold rain from outside makes him wet.

Mother, tell me where have you been
I want you to come in
Save me – I'm so ill!

She only hugged him when he was ill.

(She only hugged him when he was) ILL
A little boy is home alone;
His mother has an important job.
Music plays and TV's on
He opens windows to catch a cold.
Mother, tell me where have you been
I want you to come in
Save me – I'm so ill!
She only hugged him when he was ill.
He lost his papers on a plane
That's what they wrote in the police report
Couldn't tell them what's his name
So he's enclosed at the airport.
Holland – yes, he was on a pill
That's how he likes to feel
Far from uncanny real
She only hugged him when he was ill.
Ten more years and she is gone
So he moved back to the mother's flat.
By the window all alone
Cold rain from outside makes him wet.
Mother, tell me where have you been
I want you to come in
Save me – I'm so ill!
She only hugged him when he was ill
(She only hugged him when he was) ILL
A little boy is home alone;
His mother has an important job.Music plays and TV's on
He opens windows to catch a cold.
Mother, tell me where have you been
I want you to come in
Save me – I'm so ill!
She only hugged him when he was ill.
He lost his papers on a plane
That's what they wrote in the police report
Couldn't tell them what's his name
So he's enclosed at the airport.
Holland – yes, he was on a pill
That's how he likes to feel
Far from uncanny real
She only hugged him when he was ill.
Ten more years and she is gone
So he moved back to the mother's flat.
By the window all alone
Cold rain from outside makes him wet.
Mother, tell me where have you been
I want you to come in
Save me – I'm so ill!

 

She only hugged him when he was ill.

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Genre Breakbeat Key Dm BPM 140.0

Collaboration started July 5, 2018 by engels
Last upload 1yr+4mo ago


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Copyright © 2018 by engels, All Rights Reserved.
Effective on Jul 5, 2018


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engels has declared the following Composition and Sound Recording copyright intentions for this collaboration, when completed:

Composition: Keep all rights exclusively
Sound Recording: Equally with other collaborators
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engels Sergey Engel
Jerusalem Judea Israel
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DrumTorque Pepino Lorenzo
Guadalajara Mexico