When She Smiles Adult Alternative

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When She Smiles V 2 Uploaded 6yr+9mo ago by Staffan



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Staffan   commented 7yr+4mo ago


Hi There! Casia told me about some word that was wrong so i sang it again tonight maybe more accurate i don't know? Let me know. I put the vox little more upfront maybe easier to hear, if it is right words then.I am not much of a mixer guy. Rock On

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Hotjams   commented 7yr+4mo ago


This really good. You are perfect for this song. Casia's lyrics fit the vibe of his, it's all good.

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Casia-Lyricist   commented 7yr+4mo ago


Excellent, I'm very happy with this. I really like the last "When she smiles" in the outro, the way it is louder than the other words with no music in the background.

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Casia-Lyricist   commented 7yr+3mo ago


Can we extend the music on this song a little bit as it's quite short. If we could get to at least 3:20 that would be great or we could repeat the chorus at the very end.

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Hotjams   commented 7yr+3mo ago


Yes, I have some ideas.

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Staffan   commented 7yr+3mo ago


It is nice if the song is about 3 min,if you like it you can always listen one more time. Instead of get bored.Just my opinion.Whit that said,Do you want some seps for mixing and slice and dice,or is it good as is?

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Casia-Lyricist   commented 7yr+2mo ago


Hi: How is this coming along :)?

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Hotjams   commented 7yr+2mo ago


I'm buried at work. No time for music other than a quick listen and like. It's going to be like this for a few more weeks.

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Casia-Lyricist   commented 7yr+2mo ago


No problem, I can relate. Thanks for letting us know, this is such an awesome song I'm just bumping :):). Take care and don't work tooooo hard.

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Hotjams   commented 7yr+2mo ago


Yeah I like it as well and it really fits well with Staffans vox style.

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offthewall   commented 7yr+1mo ago


Great stuff :)) Especially like the chorus. And, for what it's worth, I think it is the perfect length as is.

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dogbizkits   commented 6yr+9mo ago


This is really good stuff. Great vocal performance, Staffan. I know it's early days, but can I make a suggestion if you don't mind ? To get the mix in better balance and make it stronger, the left guitar could (should) be doubled. I don't mean just duplicating it and adding some kind of effect to make it sound different - but to actually record what's being played on the left guitar a second time on a new track. This will allow a better right/left balance. The mix is weighed down on the left at the moment. Could even go for doubling the little lead parts perhaps an octave higher (a sort of twin-lead thing) on its own track too. I'd love to do a mix of this one when all the tracks are available (if you want).

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Staffan   commented 6yr+9mo ago


I Rab I am glad you like this song :) I dont keep anything when a song sounds pretty good imo. but,i think James have a lot of tracks if you want to try a mix cheers