dean blues metal Adult Alternative

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xvpusw   commented 5yr+1mo ago


Revolution Grows Tracy Hutchison Amid dust and confusion There was revolution Gentle men ?cross the land Had blood stains on their hands Nations had flourished Only to fall Pride never sustained them No help at all Revolution grows Through fire and smoke Nations rise and fall As the trumpets call Blood on the land Of farmers and tenants A mist covered moon Tried to shine Too little too late A violent time People unaware Of what awaited Just look around At what fate did Revolution grows Through fire and smoke Nations rise and fall As the trumpets call Amid the dust and confusion There was revolution Gentle men ?cross the land Had blood stains on their hands

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joel_sattlersongs   commented 5yr+1mo ago


good stuff

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shellofme   commented 5yr+1mo ago


Oh man, very cool words!!! Thanks so much. Did you write these words for this song structure or just something you had that fit? Just asking cuz I was thinking of trying to re-structure this a bit to give it more appeal But, if you like it the way it is I won't bother. Love the lyrics!!!!

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xvpusw   commented 5yr+1mo ago


In this case, I sang a line...wrote it down...sang another...etc etc...so it goes with the current structure.

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shellofme   commented 5yr+1mo ago


Ok, cool! I like it and won't bother to change the structure now. I've had other comments on the long intro recently. Saying that the NASA audio is to long and takes away from the song. I wonder what your thoughts are on the intro? Is it to much?

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xvpusw   commented 5yr+1mo ago


Yeah I took that out.

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xvpusw   commented 5yr+1mo ago


I'll upload the hideous vox guide I made in the process. I don't like how I sang some of it though. Sounded different in my head. Sometimes it's hard to translate from head to mic for some reason. In other words I hate the way it came out but it sounded cool in my head lol

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xvpusw   commented 5yr+1mo ago


On the other hand, I could retro fit it to a different structure if you want to do that.

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shellofme   commented 5yr+1mo ago


Its all good. I do the same thing when I send lyrics. I'd love to hear your vox guide track. I'll just keep it in the archives.

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shellofme   commented 5yr+1mo ago


I won't judge your vox. Its just nice to get an idea of the flow.

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xvpusw   commented 5yr+1mo ago


I uploaded it but I hate it so I deleted it.

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shellofme   commented 5yr+1mo ago


Lol! its cool man. I did hear it b4 you deleted it though :) Like I said I wouldn't judge you on vox. I still like it. Are you cool with me making some small changes to fit the flow of the song better. I really like your words and would love to play around with them a bit. I don't think I would change much but, I think I might be able to make them more tight to the flow of the tune. I wouldn't make anything permanent without your approval so, you will have final say K. Is that cool with you?

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xvpusw   commented 5yr+1mo ago


Sure. Whatever works best.

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xvpusw   commented 4yr+12mo ago


Hello?

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shellofme   commented 4yr+12mo ago


Hey Tracy, Sorry for the delay. I'll send you a PM K. thanks.

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shellofme   commented 4yr+11mo ago


Thanks, Tracy!!! We just need to find a vocalist now. Love your lyrics!!!!

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xvpusw   commented 4yr+11mo ago


Thanks man!