The Quill Pop

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boojeej   commented 18 days ago


So I had written this song back in 2020 during the quarantine and I struggled to find a fitting music but this one is...*chef's kiss* epic. I added tons of lyrics since the song was double the amount of my original idea. The sampled, spoken in the end is really important to me and I hope we'd find a way to get it. I'm open to re-writes alongside the singer, if they find a melody I could modify them easily. Hope you like it! P.S. They're written based on a melody I had to find while singing. The sound file is also uploaded.

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boojeej   commented 16 days ago


* The windfall *THAT* comes In all times of need

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stoman   commented 14 days ago


Thanks, Dimitris. I'm going to accept this lyric and will try to create a demo melody for it. However, the lyrics still don't match the structure at all. The correct structure would be: 0:00 - 0:07 - Lead-In 0:07 - 0:17 - Intro 0:17 - 1:05 - Verse 1 1:05 - 1:53 - Verse 2 1:53 - 2:21 - Chorus 2:21 - 3:09 - Verse 3 3:09 - 3:36 - Chorus 3:36 - 4:03 - Bridge 4:03 - 4:51 - Verse 4/Solo 4:51 - End - Chorus So in order to make your lyric work, I will have to split the verses and use the second half of each verse as the chorus and then leave the actual choruses without vocals. This is far from ideal, but let's see how it turns out.

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boojeej   commented 14 days ago


Ok let?s see how it turns out while I will be revisiting the lyrics and do some re writes.

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stoman   commented 14 days ago


I'm currently working on it - back home for a little more than a day. I can use the first two original choruses for the bridge (i.e. repeat the bridge), then leave the third and the last chorus without vocals. I'll post my results shortly ...