Scream Out - Petes Audition Uploaded 4yr+4mo ago by Captainzero
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Captainzero commented 6yr+11mo ago
Hi guys, here's my effort. I love this song so much and immediately had some ideas when I heard it. I'm really sorry if it contradicts other submissions, it's just what came to me, a story of tragedy and a broken heart. I thought the other lyrics were excellent, I just had to go with what I felt. Thanks for the opportunity and please don't feel you have to use this. It was enough for me just have a play with it. :) Also, I have faded it out after the 2nd chorus, but i thought it might be cool if we did a guitar solo after that and then back into the chorus for the finish. What do you think?
JohnnyLiar commented 6yr+11mo ago
Wow Pete, this is great! I really like the direction you took the lyrics and you have some very catchy melody lines here. I think with a new mix and, of course, a guitar solo, as you suggest ;) If you are happy with your tracks, please send up seps. Thank you very much. This is one of those Kompoz, Saturday morning wake up treats:) Cheers, Mat
USAsongwriter commented 6yr+11mo ago
Well done Pete and thanks for the kind words on my lyrics! You should give the vocals a shot on "Wire Mother". Have a great weekend!
Captainzero commented 6yr+11mo ago
Forgot to post the lyrics. Here ya go: Driving down that lonely road Where were we going to I didn't see that other car Only the anger in you If only I could have known I'd have turned around and driven home A thousand times I've replayed that night As it came to an end with a blinding light CHORUS Scream out, that's all I can do Scream out, over you Scream out I cradle you in my arms I can feel your heart-beat slow I say I love you, can you even hear? I guess I'll never know As the rain, begins to fall I can hear the angels call Please I'm begging you to stay I cry as your life starts to slip away CHORUS Scream out, that's all I can do Scream out, over you Scream out, I can't believe that your gone! Baby I was so wrong Scream out
MiniMick commented 6yr+11mo ago
Nice one!
DocDaFunk commented 6yr+11mo ago
Excellent!!!(Myers Face!!)
Captainzero commented 6yr+11mo ago
Thanks guys! :D
homedrummer commented 6yr+11mo ago
Nice tune, and Pete you keep on surprising me!!!
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sriracha commented 6yr+10mo ago
Really like the way your voice blends with the instruments on this Pete - good range for you, man. Excellent stuff, guys!
Captainzero commented 6yr+10mo ago
Thanks Billy! I really appreciate your kind words. I agree, this one is perfect for my range. I use it for practice now because it's just such a great warm up.