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Castaways Lyrics Idea Uploaded 1yr+6mo ago by ELeyne



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ELeyne   commented 1yr+6mo ago


Hiya. Love the song! Here's a rough idea for lyrics and vocals. Might seem a bit odd at first. But hopefully it works in the end. Let me know what you think. I'm working on some alternate verses too. CASTAWAYS Bottle lying on the side of the road, A trace of strawberry wine. Did he drop it as he walked away And left the past behind? Purple sweater in the alley way, Crimson heart on its sleeve. Did she lose it as she left the club In a hurry to leave? I have to pick them up, Take them home and clean them up. Seems like I can't get enough Of everyone's castaways. I have to find a way To let them live another day, To let them know that they Are nobody's castaways. Scrap of paper carried on the wind Skips its way through the park. Is he searching madly for her address As she cries in the dark? Happy couple in the picture frame. Where are they now? I thought that you'd be coming back someday, You'd change your mind somehow. I have to pick up all the pieces that happened to fall between the cracks. There are always so many castaways. I have to pick up all the pieces that happened to fall between the cracks. There are always so many castaways.

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ELeyne   commented 1yr+6mo ago


Hi again. I didn't realize that Mark had already uploaded his excellent lyrics and vocals before I uploaded my idea. Sorry! I actually like his better. Feel free to ditch mine. Maybe we can work together on something else in the future. Love your sound! Best, Eilis

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markdeckard   commented 1yr+5mo ago


What a velvety voice you have. That was nice to hear.