Within A Cage Alternative

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Original song, need to improve guitar parts and add to the song Uploaded 1yr+4mo ago by debbiestrange



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offthewall   commented 1yr+4mo ago


Do you have vocal seps to upload or do you plan on re-recording once a new back-track is in? Oh, I've really missed your fine songs!

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debbiestrange   commented 1yr+4mo ago


I'm going to re-record.

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offthewall   commented 1yr+4mo ago


Just taking a quick look but will need to come back to it later. The age old question ..... Do you want the new guitar part to fit the timing of the song as it stands or do you want it done 'to a click'? At present it is not quite to time. Personally I don't care, just depends on if you envisage this with drums, etc.

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debbiestrange   commented 1yr+4mo ago


needs to be done to a click.

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offthewall   commented 1yr+4mo ago


OK. You have a chord list? Got it set up and had a play through but had the call to go eat. Will be back in a bit.

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JenCarie   commented 1yr+4mo ago


Hi Debbie. I'm Jen. I'm new here but I'm so happy I have found you. I'll tell you. Sometimes it is the first take of the raw singing and guitar playing that is the best. To me, this is one of the most powerful songs I've heard on here. I also take care of my elderly parents and I'll tell ya, I cried hearing this song. Then I honestly thought, this sounds like a Kentucky mountain song. And low and behold you are from Kentucky! haha. Truly... This version is something great! I hope you keep it as other versions evolve. That is the beauty of this place. How it can impact others. You have blessed me so much. I had to write down your amazing lyrics just to follow them while you sang... Thank you for this and for your gift. And welcome back! <3 Within A Cage Written by Debbie Strange V1 I've grown board Board of the mundane In a world That's simply insane Oh I have wish I could Drink some tequila V2 I never, never been a drinker I'm too much An over thinker I don't trust anyone Who says, man 'I feel ya' Chorus I live my life within a cage I build from fear and guilt and rage And the lock is broke I could go free But I sometimes don't remember me And the person that I used to be... Instrumental break V3 I don't like Feeling so mad But it beats Always feeling so sad Always one number off From a big lotto win V4 All these years Have taken a toll What I thought I had lost Somebody stole I'm too far gone now To repent of my sins Chorus I live my life within a cage I build from fear and guilt and rage And the lock is broke I could go free But I sometimes don't remember me... And the person that I used to be... Chorus I live my life within a cage I build from fear and guilt and rage And the lock is broke I could go free But I sometimes don't remember me And the person that I used to be....

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offthewall   commented 1yr+4mo ago


Lovely comments Jen. Debbie has been away from us for some time so it might pay you to check through her profile at some of her past songs. She is a mega talent both in song writing and singing style. You two could do some great duets, I reckon. :))

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JenCarie   commented 1yr+3mo ago


Just saw this James! YES! I'm a super fan now for sure. She is amazing. This needs to be in a movie scene. For real. I hope she comes back. I would LOVE to work with her!! :D