Happy Valentine's Electric Blues

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By Justin Zachery Powers
1yr+2mo ago

Wow. I just discovered the lyrics. Pretty dam solid against the track. If allowed, I would only do slight modifications (for phrasing and tighter writing), but for the most part, you've got a very serviceable song. Is the original author (I don't know who I'm writing to on this post) the guitar player? What else does the author contribute to the track? The reason I ask that playing is so tasty and very dynamic. I'd like to work with this person. I'd like to offer my vocals, minor lyric tweaks, and hopefully, entice you to want to do more if the rest of your stuff is this fabulous. jzp


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Graiouf   commented 1yr+2mo ago


Hello, LooknGass created the project, and i compose and play music at this time, and Stoffander played bass part. Thanks for your comment!!! :) For me, it's not my project, so i think LooknGlass will accept or not the futurs vocals/instruments track. I was create many composition, but since few months, i have not inspiration, but sometimes, i can find inspiration... Have a good day, François

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jzpowers   commented 1yr+2mo ago


Thank you, sir. Excellent guitar playing. I agree that this is one of the better tracks I've heard on this site. I want to hear more from you, please?

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Sedge   commented 1yr+2mo ago


One of the better tunes I've heard in awhile, here or elsewhere. Love the lyrics - would indeed love to hear with the right vocals.

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Graiouf   commented 1yr+2mo ago


Thanks a lot!

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LooknGlass   commented 1yr+2mo ago


Graiouf, since I know nothing about the musical side of things, I had made you manager, so you can accept or reject any uploads. This is your song to bring alive, I will sit back and watch, and enjoy it. :)

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jzpowers   commented 1yr+2mo ago


A good choice LooknGlass. Francois exhibits some exceptional talent. Very tasteful choices. Did you write the lyric? jzp

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LooknGlass   commented 1yr+2mo ago


Yes, my friend. I addressed your post, right below this post you are reading. Thanks a lot for the interest. Very appreciative

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Graiouf   commented 1yr+2mo ago


Ah ok, thanks for that!

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LooknGlass   commented 1yr+2mo ago


Hello, I have been on a camping trip for vacation, and just got back. I wrote the lyric and Graiouf uploaded the great music for it. I appreciate everyone's kind words on the lyric!... And if you would like to private message me Justin, we can talk about your idea on the lyric. I am very flexible on modifications and slight changes. As long as the lyric remains mine at the core, I am open for anything. Now I have to go unpack and will return later today :)

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LooknGlass   commented 1yr+2mo ago


Happy belated 4th!