Very nice lyric...
Do you think you want to use these lyrics for you collaboration? If not, I would like to do a spin-off. Can you tell me what you would like to do?
I will use your lyric if someone will sing it....
So glad you like it! I think it will be great with your instrumental. I will sing it and submit it. But if someone else wants to sing it also, then you can choose which one you like best. I didn't sing it already because I would rather put in that extra work if it is going to be used in the collaboration. The lyrics were enough work for me in the last couple of days. :-). I will have the vocal part ready in 2-3 days.
I am a soprano so the key it is in now is rather low for me. I would like to change it to Bb. If you do not have software that can change the key on your track, I can do that too. If you would rather keep it in the current key, I can sing it, even though it is a little low for me. So let me know about the key.