Dance on the wire Adult Contemporary

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Ellen Idea/Audition Uploaded 5mo+21dy ago by EllenDXY



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Graiouf   commented 7mo+11dy ago


Rhooooo, very nice!!!! I love you :) :) :)

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EllenDXY   commented 7mo+11dy ago


ah thank you, you're sweet

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Graiouf   commented 7mo+11dy ago


:) Kinding, but sincerely, magic voice....

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EllenDXY   commented 7mo+11dy ago


Hello Kevin, I'm new at Kompoz and I came across your music. I realy like the vibe of this song and the lyrics. I took the liberty to rearrange the structure of the song a bit to fit the melody. I hope you like my idea. Best regards, Ellen.

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Graiouf   commented 7mo+11dy ago


I'm not the manager here, just the lead guitar, but your voice and arrangement is very perfect for me... I hope Kevin love it like me. Musically, François

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Graiouf   commented 7mo+11dy ago


And welcome on Kompoz!!!!

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EllenDXY   commented 7mo+11dy ago


Thanks, I feel welcome already. I love the lead guitar part by the way!

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Graiouf   commented 7mo+11dy ago


Thanks a lot, it's better since you singing on, my guitar is better with emptu space. Thanks for your vocals, (but it's not my project) :)

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KevinScottBrown   commented 7mo+11dy ago


Wow! Your voice and phrasing are incredible!! Allow me a moment to worship at the alter of your talent! Welcome to the circus! (and Kompoz too) On a more technical note: with your phrasing, I think at [00:00:25] 'They think I'm crazy, but what do they know' might flow better. Hows your upper register? at [00:02:41] rather than 'You got me dancin' on the wire' could you try 'Im' gonna dance on the wire! ? (this next bit is not a lyric)I want it to be you, telling them what you're going to do, it's the top of the crescendo, then back to 'If it leads me to you' just as you did. I'll finish with a thank you, you have a real gift. Kevin

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EllenDXY   commented 7mo+11dy ago


Thank you Kevin for your nice words! Great feedback; crazy is better ;-) and when I record again I'll change it into "I'm gonna dance". My upper register, well... it could be improved (just like my English).

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KevinScottBrown   commented 7mo+11dy ago


Super, Ellen I am completely ok with whatever works. Another thought: hoops of fire is clumsy. You can Leap through the fire if that fits the flow better. I'm just thrilled you're here.

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TheOther   commented 7mo+11dy ago


Simply awesome :)

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LazyFrank   commented 7mo+7dy ago


Great !

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Buttercup   commented 6mo+22dy ago


This is stunning!! Welcome to Kompoz Ellen. I absolutely LOVE your voice!

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EllenDXY   commented 6mo+18dy ago


Thank you Christine! I Love your voice and melodies. Very beautiful.

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Graiouf   commented 6mo+18dy ago


More i listen, more i love this song and your voice Ellen! I send you a kiss. :) Your best fan, François