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Apologies TREID SPIN-OFF Uploaded 1mo+8dy ago by Treid



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Treid   commented 1mo+22dy ago


Sorry about the volume... Too quiet for Rock!!! Anyway, today was my first day back in the studio after being out with food poisoning over the new year... Decided to push that Marshall up the cliff and play it to the gods!

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Heisenberg   commented 1mo+22dy ago


Hey Tim, Sorry to hear you weren't feeling well, but it sounds like you're on your feet again! Perhaps coincidentally, I think I had to clean my shorts out after listening to this version (TMI?). The gods will surely be pleased. Side note: the acoustic and vocals come out of sync by a smidge in the second verse. Historically, this would be my doing, but maybe not this time? Also, I'm curious what it would sound like if you got rid of the 2 bars after the vocals and started the palm muting 2 bars earlier? Jeff

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Treid   commented 1mo+22dy ago


That?s a good idea about moving the build two bars earlier. Is it the drums that are out of time or the vocals? I just imported the vocals as one big block so I imagine its all out if that?s the case Edit* acoustic problem!!! I’ll fix that tomorrow

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Jareichow   commented 1mo+21dy ago


Nice work. I feel like you need to bring the drums in way earlier, I run out of patience and want to start skipping forward. I would also suggest moving up the guitar feature more to the late middle (Like a middle 8) and then going soft again on the outro to bookend the beginning. Use a piano focus on the outro for a little feature change. Nice work.

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Treid   commented 1mo+21dy ago


Yeah... I understand what you mean, but at the same time if you imagine this on a standard rock album with 11 others songs. all starting with the drums in the first 0:00-0:30 then I think having the drums coming in at the end would be a unique point of this specific track. Same can be said for the outro guitar solo as opposed to the standard solo three quarters of the way through which most all the other tracks would prob have. Foresight is my friend!

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Heisenberg   commented 1mo+18dy ago


I like waiting for the 3rd verse to add the drums. It gives it a bit of a surprise. But I also agree that the instrumentation in verse 2 is missing something. You introduce a subtle lead guitar at 1:00 ... I was thinking you could weave that sound in between the vocal phrases until the chorus where the strings come in.

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SimonW   commented 1mo+21dy ago


This is really nice. I like the way the song builds, nice guitar solo as well!

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Treid   commented 1mo+21dy ago


Cheers Si, it?s a spin off but I don?t have any more projects left so I just uploaded it on here

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Treid   commented 1mo+21dy ago


Cheers Si, it?s a spin off but I don?t have any more projects left so I just uploaded it on here