Lyrics, Songwriting and Arranging

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FenderBassman / Kevin Procter 3mo+11dy ago
Hey, thought I'd put one of my lyrics out here in case someone feels that that they could use them - this is 'Shared'. If you wanna see more just drop me a line ! It?s the sort of day when the sun comes out You wonder what the worry is all about When nothing much matters and nothing much counts Let?s kick out our worries and kick off our shoes Forget about pages and pages of bad news Cos days like these are just too good to lose CHORUS Let?s get dreamy eyed, all butterfiies All hearts and flowers and bright blue skies, With summer shining in your eyes just, Drop your cares with your disguise Let?s jump for joy lets, scream and shout, We?ve things to tell this world about, This something we can?t do without This love, Shared between me and you. Let?s lie down here and have that drink, We?ll stare at the sky ?til the sun turns pink, Just hold me forever, let?s try not to think, Let?s shut our eyes and close our minds, And leave this tangled world behind, Let?s lose ourselves so no-one finds us CHORUS Let?s get dreamy eyed, all butterfiies All hearts and flowers and bright blue skies With summer shining in your eyes just Drop your cares with your disguise Let?s jump for joy lets, scream and shout We?ve things to tell this world about This something we can?t do without This love, Shared between me and you M8 Nothing can touch us now, We're way out of reach somehow, Looking down at the clouds And the rain and the grey of somebody else's day, Now it?s getting late and the sun disappears, Let?s wrap round each other and squeeze out our fears, Let?s stay this way for years and years and years


   

6 people like this: joel_sattlersongs, elizabethauzan, DTSUK, Elle66, Octorez, waltern

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waltern   commented 3mo+9dy ago


Hey there. This is Waltern and I like this lyrics. Can you tell me correctly about this lyrics. Then I will make a Melody for this lyrics and I will give them to a singer for vocals. And I will give you credit on my YouTube channel.

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FenderBassman   commented 3mo+9dy ago


Hi Walter, thanks for your interest. I'm not sure what you meant by "telling you correctly about the lyrics" - tell me what you need to know and I'll try to help Regards Kevin

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waltern   commented 3mo+8dy ago


I mean what is the rhythm of this. Topic of this.

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liljoe6string   commented 3mo+8dy ago


let me help you both, Kevin, Waltren is looking for the overall message behind your lyrics for an inspirational title as part of the creative process as he searches to give the proper mix of harmony and melody to meet your vision of how your message is best delivered. For me ~Shutting The World Out~ would be one thought for a title. (((((: yes im quite full of it. cheers and gl

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Octorez   commented 3mo+8dy ago


2 the point ! Survey says ?

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liljoe6string   commented 3mo+8dy ago


HA!

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FenderBassman   commented 3mo+8dy ago


Thanks both ! Unusually for me, this is an out and out love song about two people who are very much in tune with each other and are enjoying a summers day in the sunshine, maybe at a festival where it is easy to block out whatever is happening in / to the world on the other side of the fence, summed up by the lyric "Nothing else matters and nothing much counts". So, a very breezy, 'up', joyful, celebratory song, I felt about 80 BPM with a feel of The Cure (in their happier moments !), if you listen to "Why Can't I Be You", you'll get an idea of the feel that I was thinking of. I've always called the lyric 'Shared' because the couple are sharing the love of each other and the surroundings that they are in. Hopefully this helps but drop me a line whenever you need more info. Thanks for your interest guys!

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liljoe6string   commented 3mo+8dy ago


That's what I call proper feedback! bravo! d(*_*)b

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joel_sattlersongs   commented 3mo+8dy ago


good stuff

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DTSUK   commented 1mo+7dy ago


Great job :-)