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JustVera / Just Vera 1mo+26dy ago
Who could help me out with some serious poetry? Normally any subject would do, but for some reason I'd like this one to be the vision of a wise guy at the end of his life, looking back on a few milestones -the 3 verses- and extracting the essence of why we are around and what makes it all worth while. 0:24-0:41 verse 1 1:02-1:19 verse 2 1:41-1:58 verse 3 2:00-2:16 chorus 3:13-3:28 epilogue (The piano is thought of as the vocal melody.) Looking forward to your ideas!


   

3 people like this: Mmhartins, Mysterian, elizabethauzan

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Milo   commented 1mo+16dy ago


Not exactly what you had in mind, but this is where the melody took me ? No Remorse (Verses) I been around Ive seen it all But nothing else compares to this Theres a lady by the door I wonder who the hell she is I been inside I took the fall But no ones come to my defense Empty chairs along the wall My legs are cold my bodys tense If theres a God Ill never know My mind is clear, my eyes are dry I was born without a soul Theres nothing left to do but die No remorse (Chorus and Out) Tears cant help you now Theres no point turning around Theres no point turning around The past is behind you The past is behind you Theres no point turning around Theres no point turning around Theres no point turning around The past is behind you The past is behind you I did what I had to I have no remorse It wasnt about you I have no remorse I did what I had to I have no remorse It wasnt about you I have no remorse I did what I had to I have no remorse It wasnt about you I have no remorse Theres no point turning around Theres no point turning around Theres no point turning around

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JustVera   commented 1mo+16dy ago


Thanks Milo. You may have noticed earlier lyrical contributions from Leigh Gordon and Elizabeth Auzan, but I'll add it to my list. I'll invite a singer soon and leave the final choice to him/her. (Nice work by the way;-)...

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Milo   commented 1mo+16dy ago


Sorry. I did not know you already have contributions. Please disregard this one. I don?t want to create competition with other members.

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JustVera   commented 1mo+16dy ago


Don't be sorry, Milo. And it's not about competition, but finding the right match. Your lyrics might be just what the singer needs...

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Mysterian   commented 1mo+16dy ago


Elizabeth did me an excellent potato poem a while ago. She's great at this. Go Elizabeth!