Lyrics, Songwriting and Arranging

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DTSUK / Dave Edwards 1mo+17dy ago
Originally written for an orchestral rock collaboration... these lyrics are still sitting waiting for a new home if anyone cares to use them.... Burn Your Brightest (In The Dark) V1: We're all just prisoners of fate, We think we choose the paths we take, But every road is just a dream..... Like passing ships we can't define, The course we sail - the place the time, Carried by the currents out to sea. Pre-chorus: Swept along in life's stampede, Out of control and gaining speed, We cannot clip the wings of time..... Chorus: So take that roller coaster ride, Climb your own mountain - touch the skies, Spread your wings and leave your mark - leave your mark.... We all will laugh, we all will cry, Make sure you live before you die, And burn your brightest in the dark, burn your brightest in the dark. V2: Like riders on the wheel of chance, We don't decide the circumstance, And destiny is cold as stone.... We cannot choose the wars we fight, Unlock the doors run to the light, Into the future still unknown..... Pre-chorus2: Caught up in the flow we try, To stem the flow, hold back the tide, But what must be can't be denied..... Chorus: So take that roller coaster ride, Climb that mountain touch the skies, Spread your wings and leave your mark - leave your mark.... We all will laugh, we all will cry, Make sure you live before you die, And burn your brightest in the dark - burn your brightest in the dark.


   

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DTSUK   commented 1mo+17dy ago


Not my collab but here's my vocal submission If anyone wants an idea of the original concept... https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NgH_E6dqJn-3mZb-fF-dYIbwt-O4enWf/view?usp=sharing

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Mmhartins   commented 1mo+17dy ago


Nice song and nice vocals! Congrats!!! Mauro

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DTSUK   commented 1mo+16dy ago


Thanks but like I said the vocal was submitted and withdrawn for various reasons and now I honestly can't recall who the other musician was that supplied the track.

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MarkFulwiderStudio   commented 1mo+16dy ago


VERY COOL DUDE! We might have to work on a remake!

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Mmhartins   commented 1mo+16dy ago


For sure!

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DTSUK   commented 1mo+16dy ago


We cant emulate the original track, its not mine. Purely there as a guide to show the mood and delivery ifvthe vox guys!

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joel_sattlersongs   commented 1mo+8dy ago


good stuff