WSAO / Andre Avino
1mo+15dy ago
Hi folks, can someone help me to polish this lyric?
Lyrics is for this song:
https://www.kompoz.com/music/collaboration/1221020/bounces
Any suggestion, alteration, modification are welcome.
Thanks heaps!
Control Freak:
Verse 1:
I can see in your eyes
You?ve got that look again
Turning red and getting high
And I freeze my brain
Frustration streams
Nasty insults overflow
Loud mad screams
The truth exposed
Chorus 1:
Damn! How do you become such a control freak?
Your behaviour starts to make me sick
If you get angry don?t put me down
You?ll be alone I?m gonna leave this town
Verse 2:
Why can you be so cruel
With someone that loved you
Causing pain that never heal
Was the good time not real?
Psychological harm
Where?s my private life?
You?ve been gone too far
but I can handle a knife
Chorus 2:
Damn! How do you become such a control freak?
Your behaviour starts to make me sick
If you get angry and try to put me down
You?ll be alone I?m gonna leave this town
I won?t lie to protect you this time
I'll fight back if you cross the line
Bridge:
I?m sick of abuse and coward threats
Touch me again and I?ll make you regret
Chorus 3:
Damn! How do you become such a control freak?
Your behaviour starts to make me sick
If you get angry don?t put me down
You?ll be alone I?m gonna leave this town
I won?t lie to protect you this time
I'll fight back if you cross the line
I had enough of your attitude
I won?t stop until you get screwed
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Verse 1: I can see in your eyes You?ve got that look again My brain starts to freeze It never ends Nasty insults flow Loud angry screams For the slightest offense You go to extremes Chorus: Control freak! You make me sick I?ve had enough of your attitude Find someone else to abuse You?re a control freak Verse 2: How can you be so cruel To someone that you love? You don?t know what love means I?ve had enough All you cause is pain Just let me live Psychological harm Is all you can give Chorus Bridge: I?m not putting up with your cowardly threats Touch me again and you?ll have a lot of regrets Go and be angry But don?t put me down You?ll be so screwed, you?ll have to leave town Chorus
Thanks Milo! Really good insights and ideas. I'll work in some of them to adjust the vocal metric. Really appreciated!
"The difference between childhood and marriage, is my mother was never so angry, hurtful and bitter" (Just something I thought up recently) Ain't relationships awesome.