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JustVera / Just Vera 1yr+7mo ago
Trail of sparks... Rediscovered this 7 year old track yesterday. Removed some dust and noticed it still had the Hungarian placeholder for lyrics/vocals. Anybody?!


   

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umutkandemir66   commented 1yr+6mo ago


Nice... seeing as you have a picture of a mevlevi derwish on there, perhaps some hard-hitting poetry would go nicely with it...

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JustVera   commented 1yr+6mo ago


Hardhitting poetry: I'd love to hear that, Umut!

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Deeptrope   commented 1yr+6mo ago


You wanted poetry? You got it! It hit me about as hard as I've ever been hit in my life! My little sister's tragic death shook me into a state of surreality... everything in slow motion. This reads out verrrry slowly to the tune. The "Pre-chorus" reads out. Not sure you can have a chorus that doesn't repeat, but I like breaking the rules anyway! :-) I can definitely sing it out but it pretty much slowly follows the lead in most parts. It's definitely a dark piece-o-mine! :-) Sadly, true. I was tearing up as I tweaked it to the tune. Let me know. John

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umutkandemir66   commented 1yr+6mo ago


Sorry to hear your loss my friend.. I hope she lives on in your words :)

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umutkandemir66   commented 1yr+6mo ago


I can try my best.. though it needs be written at night. Its definitely a night-time song for me :) Why did you choose a sufi picture for the collaboration?

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JustVera   commented 1yr+6mo ago


Guys... First of all: John thank you for sharing your personal story. Let's turn sadness into something beautiful. I don't know about your vocal qualities, but you speaking/rapping/reciting/singing these lines would be the obvious choice, wouldn't it? As for the mevlevi derwish: I was intrugued. Just that. The mystery basically. Btw This weekend I'm working long hours, but I'll change the title and the picture to match Johns lyrics on Monday.

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Deeptrope   commented 1yr+6mo ago


Still trying to get this site to load this thing! I've never had THIS much trouble. Gonna shut all the way down and wait. 30 mins... 1600 my time. Laters