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ValShal / Alfonso PeNa 7mo+22dy ago
Hi!! Can anyone give me your feedback on this?


   

11 people like this: soundman1955, BoneSaw, Mahzin, pramsay, WaiheDave, dogbizkits, TSTstudios, GELECTRIC, Moonrunner, Ulcur, GoYeah

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GoYeah   commented 7mo+22dy ago


Very nice ! Wondering if all seps are posted so a strong mix/master could be done ... Oh, just looked and, nope ... no seps ... Structurally speaking, the guitar solo is early in the song ... maybe placed before the 2:30 vocal break/transition ? Ending is a bit busy with backups ... trimming ? All in all it's a good song :)

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ValShal   commented 7mo+22dy ago


Thanks for your comments!!! By the way, what does "backups" mean?

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GoYeah   commented 7mo+22dy ago


Backup vocals ... the secondary voices behind .... behind the Lead voice

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ValShal   commented 7mo+22dy ago


could you make it with the extends (sItems)?

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GoYeah   commented 7mo+22dy ago


Indeed anyone could with the dry stems (dry means no effects whatsoever) just every track of instruments and vocals without reverb, delay or any fx ... I am sure several mixers would love doing this one, me first :)

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GoYeah   commented 7mo+22dy ago


Simply upload all of them to your song's site and we will feast on a good song :)

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GELECTRIC   commented 7mo+22dy ago


agree Luc

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kman   commented 7mo+22dy ago


Wonderful song, wonderful mix. I like it as it is. It has a nice low end that I like (u know I'm bass player :)). Overall very well balanced. I love the toms being fat but not at all exaggerated. I have no proposal to improve. Congratulations :))

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ValShal   commented 7mo+21dy ago


It's nice to know that I'm going in the right direction. Jay has a lot to do with the low end, he has recorded and mixing the drums.

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tbase2000   commented 7mo+21dy ago


What a beautiful song. Well done! Here's feedback: Stereo panned hard left and right for acoustic rhythm. You can think of each part of the song being it's own scene which you need to produce a little differently than the others. That gives you momentum and creates fun opportunities. Late in the song there is a single strumming sad guitar with some vocals. That's cool but have him be saved along with the crecendio that brings you out of it into the chorus with some wide panned strumming guitars again. If you mix between wide panned and tight...you will get more emotion out of your mix. Just thoughts.

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ValShal   commented 7mo+21dy ago


Tony your comments are always very accurate. I will try to do what you suggest. It's also possible that I have too many guitars right now. In the chorus I have two different acoustic guitar strumming open a little to the sides and an electric one also doing a strumming

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Mahzin   commented 7mo+20dy ago


Great song. If you wish I can assist with mixing or mastering. Detail, the mix isn't bad and the master too, it's taste, but if you wish to see another different work ;).

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ValShal   commented 7mo+19dy ago


Thanks, it's a good option!

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soundman1955   commented 7mo+17dy ago


Yup, that's a hit. Congrats !

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ValShal   commented 7mo+17dy ago


Thanks!!!

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TSTstudios   commented 7mo+17dy ago


Lovely song! Sounds good :) Just a bit boxy sound on the vocal but that is in the recording and I would widen the harmony a little bit more But that is all about taste ;) Really a great song it is! Tom

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ValShal   commented 7mo+17dy ago


I'm waiting for Jay. He recorded the drums but now he's not here and I need his tracks to finish the mix

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TSTstudios   commented 7mo+17dy ago


If you have his mail it would be quicker then add a comment here I think