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A line I had in mind when writing this was:
It was the Devils hand
Man I'm sure you'd understand
I wouldn't do it on my own.
I like what you have written Jannik , you should write more .
Thanks Teek! I'm more here for the music and would prefer to leave the lyrics to you pros!
Contrary to what my past has already shown.
Was the Devil's voice
You know I had no choice
It wouldn't be the first time
Don't know who's fault it was, but ya know it wasn't mine
It was the Devil's touch
He comes round too much
Makin' me feel safe and secure
But ya know he's made of hooks and lures
This is a nice one Shannon! Do you have enough for the complete tune and could you upload the lyrics to the collab so that potential singers can find them?
I usually let the singer decide the lyrics as he/she also makes the melody and has to be able to deliver the lyrics comfortably.
Lord Homer taught me
when it's my fault i can choose
Who can I blame
was the voice of the devil
(Sorry for the joke, lol!)
Good catchy melody. Is that the vocal line?
I would find someone to write a vocal melody first and then do lyrics. I'd be happy to jump in this, if you would be so gracious to have me. 🙂
thanks for the advice! The collaboration is open for anyone to contribute to - also you. I'll use what ever contributions fit my vision of the song best :)
I've uploaded some ideas... (just an impromptu attempt to offer more vocals than the track allowed, as at the moment it's quite short, so have two vocal layers which would need arranging and taking the best bits).
Let me know if it's what you had in mind and I can work on the lyrical arrangement...
Also was done with my lesser mic so quality may not be perfect with this take, but may be OK. Amy