Vocals

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jannik / Jannik Gade 9mo+11dy ago
Lyrics wanted for this blues tune! Any ideas??


   

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jannik   commented 9mo+11dy ago


A line I had in mind when writing this was: It was the Devils hand Man I'm sure you'd understand I wouldn't do it on my own.

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Teek   commented 9mo+11dy ago


I like what you have written Jannik , you should write more .

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jannik   commented 9mo+11dy ago


Thanks Teek! I'm more here for the music and would prefer to leave the lyrics to you pros!

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ShannonB   commented 9mo+11dy ago


Contrary to what my past has already shown. Was the Devil's voice You know I had no choice It wouldn't be the first time Don't know who's fault it was, but ya know it wasn't mine It was the Devil's touch He comes round too much Makin' me feel safe and secure But ya know he's made of hooks and lures

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jannik   commented 9mo+11dy ago


This is a nice one Shannon! Do you have enough for the complete tune and could you upload the lyrics to the collab so that potential singers can find them? I usually let the singer decide the lyrics as he/she also makes the melody and has to be able to deliver the lyrics comfortably.

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EdsonCastro   commented 9mo+11dy ago


Lord Homer taught me when it's my fault i can choose Who can I blame Forgive me, was the voice of the devil (Sorry for the joke, lol!)

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JohnBB   commented 9mo+11dy ago


Good catchy melody. Is that the vocal line?

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JohnBB   commented 9mo+11dy ago


I would find someone to write a vocal melody first and then do lyrics. I'd be happy to jump in this, if you would be so gracious to have me. 🙂

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jannik   commented 9mo+11dy ago


Hi John, thanks for the advice! The collaboration is open for anyone to contribute to - also you. I'll use what ever contributions fit my vision of the song best :)

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ForestUK   commented 9mo+11dy ago


I've uploaded some ideas... (just an impromptu attempt to offer more vocals than the track allowed, as at the moment it's quite short, so have two vocal layers which would need arranging and taking the best bits). Let me know if it's what you had in mind and I can work on the lyrical arrangement... Also was done with my lesser mic so quality may not be perfect with this take, but may be OK. Amy